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What am I thankful for? I am glad you asked! I am thankful for a boatload of things. For one thing, I am thankful that I have a loving, caring, adoptive family. Because of them, I get to play with friendly foster kids. Another thing I am thankful for is I am living in a home full of people! I also have a great education! I am super smart and have a great brain thanks to the teachers who taught me! Lastly, I am thankful that my parents have a job. My dad works for the fire men. And my mom hangs out with little kids all day! I love Thanksgiving because, to me, it's a reminder of all the many things I am happy that I have